Group 1 Peer Review for Group 2 (Section 103)

We like the idea of creating a Question Sharing Mobile App, since it is definitely important for ethical dialogues to occur between students. Here are a few comments we have about your proposal.

 

Content-related comments:

  • I like the idea that the rest of the thread isn’t displayed until the user posts a comment. This helps prevent predispositions to certain stances and will help make sure that the user’s answer is genuine.

  • If the app you all are proposing really does expand globally one day, that would be awesome. Ethical perspectives certainly differ from country to country, and even state to state, so it would be interesting to see conflicting and complementary opinions on certain issues.

  • I think it would be good to include a feature that would let users submit their own questions. Right now it seems that the same 50 original questions might get old. I also think that a set of 50 questions is too small to include a wide enough array of topics for students to discuss and especially not large enough to include enough questions for a “randomized” algorithm to choose from. In other words, how many suggestions can you “randomly” draw that are related to #NuclearWaste from only 50 questions?

  • You say, “Research will have to be done in creating an App for both Android and IOS operating systems.” — Research on what? Or do you mean just development?

  • The proposal mentioned “The user can afterwards continue on the conversation that may have already been started by other students on threads under the question. There will also be a feature that allows students to vote up or down questions, answers, and comments. Questions, answers, and comments can be sorted by votes or by most discussed.”, so will users be posting under their real name? Will this deter participation?  You may want to consider anonymous posting, but it has its own set of problems as well.

  • Should students be allowed to ‘vote down’ other’s views and perspectives? Will this deter participation as well? Will the discussions eventually lose diversity if ‘different’ opinions (those that are not popular) are continuously shot down. The idea of ‘voting up’ seems to suggest that the most popular perspective always the most ethical one? Perhaps you can invite a professor involved in that field to act as moderator?

Miscellaneous comments:

  • Generally when you hashtag something, you don’t want a space in between words (#Nuclear Waste should be #NuclearWaste)

Group 3 – Peer Review (For Group 4)

We are going to split up the peer review into two basic parts: The Proposal, and The Blog.

For the written proposal, there are a few points that you should revise. First of all, in the “Objective” section, and the “Motivation” section, you seem to be talking specifically about industry, and then comment that your sought audience are people who will be going into industry. After that, you seem to change your focus by specifically addressing Berkeley Research, and Berkeley students. Basically, you should make this proposal more clear by specifically mentioning right off the start what the blog will contain, and who will read it. Secondly, you guys could elaborate more about how using this blog will have an ethical impact on industry. It is clear that people will use this blog, and people will think about ethics while using this blog. However the main argument is that people will remember to be ethical after using this blog, bringing that ethical awareness to industry. You should elaborate a little more about why this blog is particularly successful in accomplishing this goal.

For the blog, we have two suggestions.

Having the ability to “sign in” through some account needs to be implemented for the following reasons. First, if you were to include a comments box, you would have to have some unique identifier, or there would be tons of randoms posting silly comments. Second, if you want to get more accurate feedback, implementing “one vote per user,” will prevent any user corrupting the responses by continuously re-voting an answer. Without this, your statistics will not be credible, since they can be completely skewed through any one user.

Second, you should change the way that the questions are phrased/responded. You guys phrase the questions/responses as if they are black and white. However, that takes away the true nature of ethics–there should be a range and/or point value system to the responses. Therefore, people can more accurately express there opinions, because you are limiting there ability to truly express their answers. With a “yes” or “no”, response, you do not get as much significant feedback/make the question bias, than if you phrased it as a 1-10 answer.

Other then these suggestions, you guys have a great proposal and idea for promoting ethical awareness. We thought the blog was really interesting, and definitely has significant potential.

Section 103: Group 4 Peer Review of Group 3

Group 3 presented an argument that involved the storing of data done by technology data giants such as Google and Microsoft, and how it is unethical for these data companies to collect its users information without users knowing what information is being kept. Group 3 proposed that the university must be transparent about the information that the university stores  and protect the personal information of students and their collected data from being misused. This solution does not seem very clear in requesting protection from misuse when misuse is not defined. The university may not share the same definition of misuse, so I would advise Group 3 to be more specific in defining what they want their data protected from. Do you want your data protected from the police to use against you in court? Be specific.

Group 3 also proposed for the university to delete any storage collected from students that is not being used. What can the university do with the data other than get you in trouble with it? If the university is selling data to businesses to attract students through advertisements, then will the university be allowed to keep the data since they are using it? Or would you consider this as being misused? Again, misuse needs to be defined clearly.

The action of Group 3 to submit a proposal letter to the ASUC student body is a very logical and suitable choice to carry out their proposal. They understand that the ASUC will be able to access the policies of the university and are most fit to track the actions of the university abiding to the proposals requests. Based on the above, our group would like to give Group 3 a B.

Section 104 Group 6 Peer Reviewing Group 1

https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/30/project-proposal-group-1/

 

After reading the proposal, we felt the grammar, organization, structure, and focus was dismal. Going through and straightening out the organization and grammar usage will ensure a smoother delivery of the overall message of the proposal. Furthermore, in terms of focus, the civic engagement proposal of the project is ill-defined and unclear. It seems that the idea is to contact the university and the organization in charge of cutting down trees to garner funds for redwood saplings. We feel that the actual methodology and plan hasn’t been clearly explained, and that little is proposed to appeal to the student body, the largest population affected by this issue, to promote ethical awareness which is the main goal of this project. Furthermore, we can see the ethical nature of the redwood controversy, but the different ethical perspectives and arguments are not well thought out. Two suggestions are to clearly state the goal of the proposal, and to detail out a list of each step pertaining to carrying out the primary goal of the proposal.

As for the presentation itself, it seemed as if group members weren’t entirely on the same page. Based on the presentation it seems that to successfully carry out the proposal, the members of the group should hone in on the goal and develop a method behind how exactly they want to contact the dean/administration.

Overall this proposal and presentation was poorly and hastily organized, and we see a lot of areas for improvement that can help better address the project topic and further encourage community involvement.

Group Links

Section 101

Group 1 – Jonathan, Vivian, Iskander, Rohan – A website dedicated to ethics at Berkeley

Group 2 – Ayla, Ian, Cory, John – A company to protect whistleblowers

Group 3 – Nelson, Nathan, Hi, Jian – Redefining ethics videos in the workplace

Group 4 – Cheyanne, Rafi, Amy, Bill – Designing hands-on environment education seminars

Group 5 – Lars, Ollie, Darrel, Alexandre – A survey to prevent conflicts of interest

Group 6 – Daniel, Kelvin, Kyle, Jason – A tailored workshop to redefine the ethical tools for engineers. The Oakland Bay Bridge.

Section 102

Group 1 – Project Two Cents App (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/18/project-proposal/)

Emily, Maruchi, Quinn, Yu Jun

Group 2 – DIY Biology (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/group-project-proposal-section-102-group-2/)

Laura, Ben, Ori, Taner

Group 3 – Tax breaks for ethical companies (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/tax-breaks-for-ethical-companies/)

George, Kavin, Kevin, Austin

Group 4 – Video for ethical researchers (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/e125-project-proposal/)

Jambu, Nitin, Brett, Hyun

Group 5 – Ethics in Industry: Boeing (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/19/group-5-project-proposal/)

Jonathan Lei, Jonathan Ma, Uday, Michael

Group 6 – Promoting ethical awareness through an ethics video (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/group-6-group-project-proposal/)

Henry, Alex, Alton, Sonia

Section 103

Group 1 – Brian, Selena, Andrew, Kien – Designing a novel ethics class

Group 2 – Phillip, Jae, Albert, Shan – A question sharing mobile application

Group 3 – Neel, Shubham, Shaun, Leo – A proposal to protect the privacy of our data at Berkeley

Group 4 – Sea, Sean, Aniket, Gerald – An ethical course survey

Group 6 – Vashisht, Jing, Jenny, Kevin – Writing to startups about ethics

Section 104

Group 1

Jaben, Amrit, Mustafa

Group 3 – Design of an interactive ethical app (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/section-104-group-3-group-proposal/)

Nathan, Sam, Romi, Ryan

Group 4 -Engineering blog to transition engineering students to industry (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/group-project-section-104/)

Amy, Daniel, Nicole, James

Group 5 – Creating a flyer with ethical scenarios (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/group-project-proposal/)

Paulo, Tim, Jason, Eshan

Group 6 – Ethical handout and survey (https://engineeringethics.edublogs.org/2014/04/20/section-4-group-6-project-proposal/)

Alex, Maccallum, MJ, Ashlee

Section 101, Group 2 Ethics Project Proposal

Ian Mair

Ayla Peters

John Norton

Cory McDowell

Group 2 Project Proposal

Throughout the course of the semester, we have learned about various schools of ethical thought and how they apply to engineering. We have also discussed and analyzed various engineering situations in which we are called to make an ethical decision based on our values and defend the decisions we make. However, the environment in an engineering firm or in a company that employs engineers is vastly different than that of an academic setting, and we feel that although this class has helped us to recognize ethical issues and identify why it is paramount that we deal with them rather than push them under the rug, many students going into the engineering field straight out of college do not know what resources there are for them to deal with the issues they face. This can be detrimental for both the new employee and the company: the employee may feel that they are unequipped to address the issues (for example, if the employee is a junior engineer and has very limited ways to reach management, or if they are threatened by their superiors and told to keep quiet), and it is detrimental to the company because employees may not say anything about issues that can harm the company’s revenue or reputation later on, or even issues that are endangering their lives or the lives of others.

To deal with the ethical issues that are found on a day-to-day basis around the workplace, we are proposing to establish a company that will serve as a resource for employees and employers in dealing with specific ethical issues they have found. Our plan is for this company to be an outside, nonbiased firm that will not only educate employees about the resources available to them (such as OMBUDS, outside organizations, pertinent legislation, etc.), but also act as a bridge to those witnessing/experiencing the ethical issues for themselves and management, who may not be aware of or understand the gravity of these issues. The goal for our company is to educate employees about the different resources that are available to them so they can deal with the problems they face, but also to establish more preventative (rather than reactive) methods in dealing with ethical problems in the workplace.

In order to be most effective in accomplishing our company’s goals, we would maintain small close knit teams of 4 members. Each business or company that we provide ethics consultation for, will be assigned a single team. That team would be responsible for conducting a full scale investigation into that companies ethics policies as well as workplace environment. Upon conclusion of the investigation, the team would present their findings in a manner that they feel best communicates their message to the employees. Furthermore, that team would work to maintain a relationship with that corporate customer to follow up on the effectiveness of our service as well as provide consulting for their future company ethics concerns. Teams will be comprised of an field specialist, a legal consultant, a presentation designer, and a group leader. The field specialist’s responsibilities are to bring domain specific knowledge of the types of ethical issues in the customer’s field. The legal consultant’s job is to understand the company’s legal structure and extract pieces pertinent to potential ethics issues. The presentation designer is in charge of coalescing the main ideas revealed from the investigation into the best means with which to present that to the employees. Finally, the group leader serves as the point of contact with the corporate customer. Each group will be hand selected to suit the customer and be educated on how to best conduct an ethics consultation by an in-house training program our company provides.

A specific example of a resource our company will relay to employees is The Whistleblower Protection Programs offered by the United States Department of Labor. A whistleblower is someone who exposes misconduct or dishonest or illegal activity in an organization. The program provides information about the different statutes that protect whistleblowers from retaliation from their employers, and it even gives someone the opportunity to file a complaint. It might dissuade an employee from reporting misconduct if he/she fears repercussions from his/her company, but if an employee knows he/she is protected by the statutes outlined in the Whistleblower Protection Program, then he/she can feel comfortable to expose and thus eliminate misconduct in the workplace. Whether an employee knows about such a resource dictates whether that employee will do what is right even when the employee is ordered to do what is wrong, and that is why our company is so important.

Another subject that is particularly important to engineers is that of the intellectual property rights of an employee. In general, if an engineer is an employee of a company, any idea or invention that this engineer develops while working for the company is the property of the company, not the engineer. Even if the engineer develops this invention outside of work, if he/she uses the company in any way at all (even something as small as using the company copy machine), then the company can claim the invention. What our company will do is warn employees about their very limited intellectual property rights and advise employees as to how they can develop ideas without sacrificing their rights. These rights vary on a case-by-case basis, depending on the contract signed between the company and the employee, so our company would read over each contract and levy advice accordingly.

Another confusing issue that our company would clear up is that of bribery. We would answer the question of what exactly is bribery? Is taking a client out to a nice dinner bribery? Well, in the medical industry the answer is yes because specific laws have been enacted forbidding pharmaceutical representatives from even giving doctors free pens. However, in other industries, this is completely acceptable and deemed as “customer entertainment”. Our company would illuminate the line between entertainment and bribery, allowing employees to do their jobs and be certain whether or not they are being ethical.

Throughout this course, we have seen the devastation that can occur when an engineer makes the wrong choice in an ethical dilemma. Existing ethical resources are often overlooked or ignored by employees of many corporations. Our consulting company will make sure ethical resources are improved and noticed. If an employee needs to learn about his or her available ethical resources at the time he or she has an ethical dilemma, it is too late. By educating employees about what they can do before any incident occurs, this proactive rather than retroactive approach can hopefully eliminate most ethical dilemmas, as employees will have been taught how to conduct themselves properly. Through improvement of resources and better-aware employees, our consulting company will work to eliminate ethical dilemmas, and work towards having engineers making a purely positive impact.

See our civic engagement poster to be presented at an engineering convention next semester here: Group2CivicEngagementPoster.